tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post6874886947826468375..comments2023-10-06T04:46:41.176-04:00Comments on KATHRYN MAGENDIE: I see, I watched, I saw: Cleaning up those Sneakity SneakersKathryn Magendiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12863595228298349863noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-43564256410399588892009-09-03T07:58:31.883-04:002009-09-03T07:58:31.883-04:00I listened to Kat on the radio. I watched my wife ...I listened to Kat on the radio. I watched my wife listening to Kat on the radio and she watched me as I also listened to Kat.<br /><br />We watched each other listening to Kat.<br /><br />Together we watched and listened.<br /><br />Did I mention we watched and listened?Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13824632356834631279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-87574469232589070812009-09-02T20:17:09.099-04:002009-09-02T20:17:09.099-04:00Good points. I guess I feel the need to do the &qu...Good points. I guess I feel the need to do the "she watched" thing to stress we're in the heroine's POV, but the reader knows that, doesn't she/he? I'll be watching for this...Stephanie Farishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10461865229341760836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-30250796842846436152009-09-02T14:02:23.064-04:002009-09-02T14:02:23.064-04:00Great advice, Kat. I really enjoyed your radio int...Great advice, Kat. I really enjoyed your radio interview. I hope your writing time is productive and your heels stay safe.Deb Shuckahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03439395710731341021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-86342676307729810852009-09-02T13:22:56.188-04:002009-09-02T13:22:56.188-04:00This is a very timely post for me as one of my cri...This is a very timely post for me as one of my crit partners pointed out to me that I use "I saw" a lot. I know better than that, but still it snuck in without me noticing. Hate it when that happens!Susan R. Millshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09578747592345750650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-39759834602059523312009-09-02T12:04:13.235-04:002009-09-02T12:04:13.235-04:00Great post! Those words look like good signposts f...Great post! Those words look like good signposts for spotting places in our ms's where we've told instead of shown. Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01603891627784763004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-70691702542745742022009-09-02T11:50:51.179-04:002009-09-02T11:50:51.179-04:00Congrats on the radio and speaking gigs! It's ...Congrats on the radio and speaking gigs! It's fun watching your success!Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6173191469938389438.post-52954806205434060462009-09-02T11:31:06.075-04:002009-09-02T11:31:06.075-04:00I love nuances. That's what makes writing so m...I love nuances. That's what makes writing so much fun. Getting to choose the perfect words.Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708851895104018255noreply@blogger.com